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Your work has a clear structure with a good logical flow, but you must pay very careful attention to the assessment criteria to ensure you plan your work to address all of them. You introduce some relevant issues but these could have been developed further. You give a brief rationale for your choice of topic of issues within manned space travel. You show a good understanding of the role of astronauts, but your worked lacked a detailed discussion of adaptations to space craft. On p.2 you explain theories behind using astronauts compared with unmanned probes, but this needed to be referenced. There are several grammatical errors so you should proof-read your work before submission.
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